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Your First Draft SHOULD Be Too Long

When I write a 60-second radio script, my first draft is sometimes closer to two minutes.

The first draft is where I dump out an idea, start writing, and see where it leads.

The next few drafts are where I decide which words deserve to survive.

Speaking and communications coach Phillip Humm calls a common communication mistake “spray and pray.” We give people every detail. Every feature. Every reason. Every teeny-tiny nugget we’re afraid to leave out.

Then we hope something sticks.

It happens in sales presentations too.

You’ve got 37 slides, research, coverage maps, ratings, demographics and enough charts to make your PowerPoint need a cigarette afterward.

But what’s the ONE thing you want the prospect to understand?

Humm recommends a great exercise: explain your idea in two minutes. Then one minute. Then 15 seconds.

You’re not practicing how to talk faster. You’re forcing yourself to decide what matters.

Try it with your next radio script.

Write everything you might want to say. Then start cutting.

Creative is too important to treat the first draft as the finished product. Kill the weak sentence. Lose the second-best benefit. Remove the clever line that doesn’t move the idea forward.

Keep the strongest words, images, emotions and specifics. Specific details give listeners something they can actually see, hear or feel – which makes them much harder to forget.

Great writing usually isn’t created by adding more. It’s uncovered by removing what doesn’t belong.

Most advertisers will happily give you 90 seconds of information they think absolutely has to be in the ad. Your job is to protect them from themselves (which should be a topic on its own).

Whether you have :60, :30, or :15… your job isn’t to fill the time…
Your job is to make the time matter.

By the way, this article was at least 25% longer when I started.

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Don’t Sell 52 Weeks of Random Ads

If you’re asking an advertiser to commit to a long-term branding campaign, there should probably be a better creative strategy than:

“We’ll write you a new commercial every month or so.”

Otherwise, you may just be selling them 12 different commercials fighting for custody of the same brand.

Advertising trainer and BrandsFormation author Chuck Mefford teaches a a memorable way to build long-term campaigns: Bricks & Mortar.

The bricks change.

Stories. Humor. Customer problems. Situations. Seasonal angles. Different creative ways to earn the listener’s attention.

The mortar stays.

The positioning idea. Slogan. Jingle. Distinctive voice. Music. Sonic signature. Memorable phrases. The brandable pieces an advertiser can eventually own.

Here’s a completely made-up, rough example for our fake business, Northstar Appliance Repair.

Their main mortar is:

“Your appliance broke. Your day doesn’t have to.”

Now watch how we can build around it…

60-SECOND EXAMPLE

[BRICK]

SFX: Washing machine banging violently.

WOMAN: Okay. That’s new.

SFX: BANG. THUMP. BANG.

WOMAN: Honey?

MAN: Oh wow. If you’re wondering whether the washing machine is supposed to walk across the laundry room… I’m gonna say no.

ANNCR: Appliances have a way of breaking at the best times. Like Sunday night. The kids need clean clothes for school tomorrow, and the laundry basket looks like it reproduced overnight.

[MORTAR]

At Northstar Appliance Repair, we give you a realistic appointment window, let you know when we’re on the way, and explain what’s wrong before we start fixing it.

[BRICK]

SFX: Another loud THUMP.

MAN: Good news. It stopped moving.

WOMAN: Yeah, because it hit the wall.

MAN: Ah.

[MORTAR]

ANNCR:  Washer. Dryer. Refrigerator. Range. Dishwasher. When one quits, you’ve already got enough aggravation. You don’t need your repair company becoming another problem.

SFX: Two-note appliance ding

Northstar Appliance Repair. Your appliance broke. Your day doesn’t have to.

Now next month, we don’t throw all of that away and start over.

We change the brick.

One more example. 30 seconds this time…

30-SECOND EXAMPLE

[BRICK]

MAN: Why is the milk warm?

WOMAN: Why is the freezer making soup?

SFX: Short stinger

MAN: I’m afraid to ask about the ice cream.

ANNCR: When your refrigerator quits, you don’t need a lecture about compressors. You need somebody to fix the refrigerator.

[MORTAR]

Northstar Appliance Repair gives you a realistic appointment window, lets you know when we’re coming, and explains the repair before the work begins.

SFX: Two-note appliance ding

Northstar Appliance Repair. Your appliance broke. Your day doesn’t have to.

Different problem. Different story. Different commercial.

Same advertiser. Same promise. Same “house”.

I’m pretty dang sure we could make this fake appliance repair business a household name!

One important note: Bricks and mortar is one very effective way to build a long-term branding campaign. It’s not the only way. Great advertising can take a lot of different forms. Don’t turn a good framework into another formula.

This also gives you a much better way to sell long-term Radio.

Just don’t rush the start date. Take the time to build something great for your new client. If you tell them it may take 3 or 4 weeks to get the strategy and creative right, that alone sends a message: you’re not just trying to get them on the air. You’re trying to make this work!

Keep the mortar. Change the bricks.

Build a campaign – not a pile of commercials.

Something that has a chance to (in the words of Chuck Mefford) turn a good small business into a great local brand!

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Thoughtful doctor illustrating the Peak-End Rule and why the ending of a sales meeting matters

Don’t Blow the Goodbye

A study about colonoscopies is about to make you better at sales.

Yes. Colonoscopies.

Researchers Daniel Kahneman and Donald Redelmeier studied how patients remembered unpleasant medical procedures. Interestingly, people’s memories weren’t simply an average of the entire experience.

They were heavily influenced by the most intense moment – and how the experience ended.

It became known as the Peak-End Rule. Later research even found that patients given a slightly less-unpleasant ending remembered the overall procedure more favorably.

No, I’m not suggesting your sales presentations resemble a colonoscopy.

Hopefully.

But think about how many good client meetings end like this:

You’ve spent 30 minutes asking questions. You uncovered something important. You shared a great idea. The client is engaged.

Then…

You start gathering your papers.

“Well, I’ll put something together and email it over.”

You shake hands.

And… scene.

Don’t waste the ending.

Before you leave, remind them of one important thing they told you, connect it to one idea you’re excited about, and establish one specific next step.

Something like:

“You told me getting more qualified applicants is probably your biggest problem right now. I’ve already got an idea rattling around in my head for that. I’ll work it up and bring it back Thursday.”

That feels different, doesn’t it?

It shows you listened. It creates anticipation. And it gives the meeting an ending worth remembering.

We spend a lot of time worrying about how to open a sales call. Maybe we should put a little more thought into the last 60 seconds, too.

Because apparently, the goodbye matters.

Even with a colonoscopy.

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Radio’s Secret Weapon is Still Human

Coleman Insights recently sat down with ten radio listeners between the ages of 24 and 46 and asked what they like, dislike, and value about Radio. 

Ten people certainly don’t represent 200 million-plus weekly listeners. But what they said is worth paying attention to. 

One word kept bubbling to the top: 

Connection. 

They like Radio because it’s easy. Turn it on. No searching. No scrolling. No deciding which of Spotify’s millions of songs you’re emotionally prepared for at 7:13 in the morning. 

They appreciate hearing weather and traffic instead of looking at another screen. They like trivia, celebrity gossip, funny stories, everyday conversations, and hearing a song they forgot they loved. 

Several said Radio also gives them an escape from the heavier stuff going on in the world. 

There were complaints, too. 

Song repetition? Every listener mentioned it. 

Too much heated political talk? A turnoff. 

Bad commercials? Yep. 

One listener wished commercials “got a little help from the radio channel, because some of them just aren’t that good.” 

Ouch. 

Interestingly, listeners didn’t say they hated commercials. One even said they liked them because they made Radio feel current. 

There’s an important distinction: 

People don’t necessarily hate advertising. They hate advertising that wastes their attention. 

Then there was AI. 

Listeners overwhelmingly preferred real human personalities. One liked hearing little imperfections—even a cough—because it proved somebody was actually there. 

Another said if Radio replaced its people with AI, “at that point it’s a streaming service.” 

Exactly. 

Radio doesn’t beat Spotify by trying to become Spotify. 

Radio wins by being what Spotify can’t be: 

Local. Live. Unexpected. Useful. Entertaining. And wonderfully human. 

Now, I’ll add one of my own Radio pet peeves. J 

Some stations tease an interesting local story or fun fact… then say, “For the rest of the story, visit our website or app.” 

Just finish the story! I’m listening right now! 

If I’m driving, I’m not going to remember to look it up later. And I probably don’t want another reason to stare at a screen anyway. 

You had my attention. Then you sent me somewhere else. How do you suppose listeners feel when that happens? What do they murmur under their breath? 

Whether you’re a manager, salesperson, copywriter, or the salesperson who also has an air shift at 2:00… 

Protect that connection. 

It IS Radio’s greatest competitive advantage. 

Duane Christensen
Ens Media

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